Thursday, January 14, 2010

Straw Slippers I Need Help Writing A Poem.?

I need help writing a poem.? - straw slippers

I must write a poem of inspiration for this poem --

Come live with me and my love,
And we will all the pleasures prove
The valleys, forests, hills and fields,
Woods or craggy mountains yields.

And we sit on the rocks
You see the shepherds feed their flocks,
Due to the shallow rivers and waterfalls
Melodious birds sing madrigals.

I make beds of roses
And a thousand fragrant bouquets
A hat with flowers and a skirt
Embroider'd myrtle leaves everything:

A dress made of the finest wool,
Which of our great throw sheep;
Fair lined slippers for the cold
With gold buckles:

A carpet of straw and ivy buds,
With dressing made of coral, and amber studs;
And if these pleasures may happen to you
Come live with me and my love.

The shepherd of the shepherds, dance and song
For fun, you each morning in May;
If these delights can move your heart,
Then live with me and my love.

Basically, this is a man trying to This lady come to live with him for all sorts of things gving materials. I have to write a modern version of the.

You must have the same rhyme scheme. (AABB CCDD ...)
Must be 6 lines. Four lines each.
I also write from the perspective of the daughter of a man.

Any ideas would be useful. I am writing to poetry, so any help would be great to terrible. Thank you.

4 comments:

(:jOn:) said...

Hey, I have a similar work for hw Hamlet's soliloquy in "Hamlet" in which he wrote the keywords put in the monologue of a different perspective of the individual.

If you must write in the perspective of a young girl, what are the prejudices that girls are you? They are all scam? Selfish? Only care about sex? such things?

I just want to rewrite all the verses, and replaced it with a girl say a lot about a person.

P. ex. Stanza 1
Come live with me and my love,
And we will all the pleasures prove
The valleys, forests, hills and fields,
Woods or craggy mountains yields.

Change it as ...
Oh, my love for you is true
And my feelings do not deceive me
The valleys, forests, mountains and fields,
Can not help but yell at my feet,

Help Sorry if this is not much

swizzkid... said...

Poems do not always rhyme;
But if you want, then visit www.rhymezone.com
This page will help you in words that rhyme with the word that needs help. It is an ideal place for a poem in verse.
I am also a poet, as I am a great help;
Go to Google and wrote: "[Writing this kind of poem] Poetry"
This will also help.
good luck:]

Chris said...

You can try to say with the opposite effect, I things that are so little.

Are precisely the things to look for modern women, and to say the opposite of everything. ;]

Who has this poem?
I am also a poet in the sense, and I have not seen this poem before.

Chris said...

You can try to say with the opposite effect, I things that are so little.

Are precisely the things to look for modern women, and to say the opposite of everything. ;]

Who has this poem?
I am also a poet in the sense, and I have not seen this poem before.

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